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Here is a test of two headlines that I just wanted to share with you.  One headline was more subtle and the other one was a bit more aggressive.  It turns out that for the target audience of our client the subtle headline far outsold the more aggressive headline.  What was the difference?

Take a look:

Winning headline:

Losing headline:

The results:

Sign-up rate of winning headline: 16.22% (641 visitors)

Sign-up rate of losing headline: 13.15% (502 visitors)

Gain = 23%

The only difference between the two headlines was that in one sub-headline we added the words “Starting Today.”  That’s it!  However, that alone dropped the sign-up rate from 16% to 13%!  So, the next time you write a headline, be cautious and don’t be too pushy, and the results may surprise you.

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Prior to MindValley Media, Mike was the Head of New Ventures Strategy at eBay where he conceived of the strategies that led to the investment in Craigslist, the launch of Kijiji.com and the acquisition of Skype. Mike has an MBA from Stanford and previously worked for the Boston Consulting Group. He is also a certified Google AdWords Professional.

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